I've lost sight of reality I can't see nothing everything is pitch black as i walk in the night i don't see my shadow i see a beast glaring at me laughing at me ready to take over to eat me up. I've lost my path i walked so much and my emotions are going high I just want to see a familiar face but, all I see is none, I can't see I can't smile all I can do is stand my ground and say nothing, I've lost the need to sleep as I have tried time and time again I can't sleep in peace, so I scream ,yell cry, fall and noone knows this lost soul. |
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this seems like a point of view of how a person feels when lost and needs guidance in the world to stay strong...
but they just end up being silent in the end and don't have a care for the world..i like it, its interesting...the title does seem a bit off...but it still fits the point...good writing, keep it up.
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I'm feelin' REAL
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