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      I've lost sight of reality I can't see nothing everything is pitch black as i walk in the night i don't see my shadow i see a beast glaring at me laughing at me ready to take over to eat me up. I've lost my path i walked so much and my emotions are going high I just want to see a familiar face but, all I see is none, I can't see I can't smile all I can do is stand my ground and say nothing, I've lost the need to sleep as I have tried time and time again I can't  sleep in peace, so I scream ,yell cry, fall and noone knows this lost soul.
©2009 ~04me
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its not linked or directed to anyone please tell me if title is wrong.

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:iconsilent-whispers-21:
hmm..this seems simaler to what I wrote last year, but put into words better...
this seems like a point of view of how a person feels when lost and needs guidance in the world to stay strong...
but they just end up being silent in the end and don't have a care for the world..i like it, its interesting...the title does seem a bit off...but it still fits the point...good writing, keep it up.
:icon04me:
thank u^^;

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:icon04me:
so waht part did you like?

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:iconsilent-whispers-21:
i liked alot of it...it was interesting...i understand the thoughts of poetry and shit like that
:icon04me:
thanks and ok

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:icon04me:
:)

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:blackrose:you only have one life so insted of living in darkness and shame go out and live like theres no tomorrow:rose:
:iconkirra2:
wow thats deep. :sniff:

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I'm feelin' REAL :blownose: right now.

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